Tuesday 27 June 2023

Rain on a Cottage Roof

 

 

Rybakova Irina


Rain on a Cottage Roof

 

From within

Slight rain seems to purr;

A heavier shower murmur,

As bees hum.

Huge hands pummel and knead

The roof under

Thunder's indigo stampede.

Rain hoofs thrum.

Now hear the house become

A drum.

 

Freda Laughton


That phrase, "now hear the house",  sticks.

Why it happens that specific words in a certain order take on something more than just the usual weight of meaning - I don't know.

I like this poem, but those three words are alive.