Siemen Dijkstra, "Last Sunlight" |
Reeds
The blades sway. They ride
Unbleached, tugged in their full sap
By the slow current. Hindering
From thought, they think us back
To that first green, which the mind
Tenderskinned, since grazed to the pain of sight,
Shrank at, lapping us in a half-green content
And, there, left us. By nature
Trenchant, blue double-whets them,
Burned through the water from a sky
That has long looked at it
Untempered by any mist. In this
There is of theme or apophthem
No more than meets the eye. The blades sway.
Charles Tomlinson
Trenchant =
vigorous or incisive in expression or style.
Apophthem =
vigorous or incisive in expression or style.
Apophthem =
a short, pithy, instructive saying; a terse remark or aphorism.
Okay, I love reeds, grasses, rushes, etc. If there's a poem about them, I will be adding it. This one mesmerizes. That bit about swaying in the current has me swaying too. Other than the image of the reeds, what grabs me most is the line "hindering us from thought, they think us back to that first green". That first green. Immediately I think Eden - the first garden, the place of pure innocence, the beginning of all. Is Tomlinson saying that the reeds recall to us that state, that place so deeply buried in us, that home we all long for? Or maybe he's saying that the reeds in their colour and motion evoke something elemental, even though they are not actually saying anything at all. I don't know, but for me, "that first green" is what I long for and where I want to be. That I know for sure.
Okay, I love reeds, grasses, rushes, etc. If there's a poem about them, I will be adding it. This one mesmerizes. That bit about swaying in the current has me swaying too. Other than the image of the reeds, what grabs me most is the line "hindering us from thought, they think us back to that first green". That first green. Immediately I think Eden - the first garden, the place of pure innocence, the beginning of all. Is Tomlinson saying that the reeds recall to us that state, that place so deeply buried in us, that home we all long for? Or maybe he's saying that the reeds in their colour and motion evoke something elemental, even though they are not actually saying anything at all. I don't know, but for me, "that first green" is what I long for and where I want to be. That I know for sure.
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